Friday, May 13, 2011

writing an e-mail

hi there, first of al i wanna introduce myself to you all. i'm just a regular student from BPK1 Christian Junior High School, Bandung, Indonesia. i'm 13 years old. i started to feel the extreme changes of weather that happens in Indonesia since couple weeks ago. then i also realized my green surroundings wouldn't be there again for any longer. according to my opinion, people today don't care about the bad effects of their actions, sometimes all they think about is just what's good for their own, but not others. people today are careless of making decision, they wouldn't think much about what will happen in the future. as long they get what they want, they will do it whatever it takes. they just don't get it how much damage they have done. and although they know about it, they don't even make a move. i suggest the government to take a fast move. the pollutions produced everyday also make the condition getting worse. i wan't the government to act and concentrate more and than others. cause the only one who can make big affects are them.
lets plant many trees as much as possible, save the forests and lands, save our next generations so they also can feel how beautiful the world is, how fresh the air is, and how clear the water is.
and i'm sending and saying this e-mail cause i'm getting worried about our environment. i wanna make a change, that's why i'm here to join this program so i can help people directly and indirectly. last time i was watching the news and i saw this program's commercial, and i want to help you all fix it somehow and support this program even though i might don't effect 'much'. i have asked my mom about this decision i've made, and she agreed.
i still have much questions to be asked, give me the exact informations of the decisions and what can i do to protect this problem :) THANKS A LOT


with GREEN,
Fransisca Setiawan

1 comment:

  1. Siscaaaaaaaaaaaa .. what is happening to you now?? Why so many gramamtical mistakes?? 1) I, not i; 2) you wrote wan't --> why using 't? Isn't it a bit strange?? And the use of V2 and tenses .... C'm on ..... try better next time... You can if you really try hard ...

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